my lord and that was scary with character but i got to edmit it does look kind scary with helmet and those bloody hooves nice texture of comic i gotta say it looks wonderful oh good job keep up great art work and never give making more comic like this
oh ps the reason do this critique because i'm kind person so
i hope made you happy by doing this critique so good luck one come and art as well and i like the new characters so here's my smile and thumbs up for you writer
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